From Mess to Yes

Okay, fine—I lost my charger again.
Laptop’s dead. My slideshow? When?
My notes are buried, my links are gone,
And my science project’s due by dawn.

Mom just stared. “You need a reset.
You’re going to your aunt’s. No internet
until you learn how to sort your stuff.
I’m done watching you crash and bluff.”

So off I went to Aunt Elaine’s place,
Where shelves were labeled and floors had space.
Even her cat had a schedule sheet.
No pizza crusts. No tangled sheets.

She raised an eyebrow when I arrived.
“Let’s see if your habits survive.”

The next day I said, “Can I take a walk?”
“Nope,” she said. “You’ve got a project to unlock.
Check your inbox—it’s waiting there.
Time to work. And do it with care.”

I flopped at my desk and powered up slow.
Then came a knock and a dramatic, “Hellooo.”
She wore two different socks and a lopsided grin:
“I’m Disorder,” she said. “Mind if I come in?”

She handed me files—some broken, some blank.
“Your aunt said to make a slideshow. You’ll tank.”
I stared at the screen. “This is a joke.”
My brain felt scrambled. My patience broke.

Then came a voice like a calm, clear bell.
“Need a hand?” she asked. “I organize well.”
Her name was Order. She smoothed every file,
Sorted my tabs, and stayed for a while.

We finished the slides. I hit submit.
Aunt Elaine walked in. “You actually did it?”
I nodded. She smiled. “Now that’s what I meant.”

Back at home, I’m still not perfect.
But I’ve got folders. And I stay on track.
Order’s with me. And I’m not going back.

“From Mess to Yes” by Nina D. Smith, published by Bright Bunny Books © 2025. Retelling of “Careless Matilda” from Little Ann and Other Poems by Jane and Ann Taylor.


“From Mess to Yes” is written for middle school students, particularly those in grades 6–8, who can relate to the challenges of organization, school deadlines, and personal growth.